Leading in Literacy

Year 2

Example 5

Supplied by Miss Job  from Chancel Infant School

This is a story about Mr Gumpy. Mr Gumpy lived by the sea. One day he disidid to go to the sea. He saw a shop he bought an
inflatable lylo To relax in the sea. He went outside. He put it in the water he sat down on it. A cuple of yard's away there was a farm. There was lots of animals the farmer wasent there and all the animals place's. The animal's askaped. The animal's went to the sea side. While Mr. Gumpy was relaxing he didn't notice that the animal's were there they went to the shop. The person who runed the shop pushed them outside. They saw Mr. Gumpy they thought that he might let them on his inflatable lylo.
So they went up to Mr. Gumpy they thout that they would go one by one. So the sheep dog went first. He said can I go on the inflatable lylo? He said Yes said Mr. Gumpy All the animal's asked Yes he said if you don't do surton thing's they were OK for a while but they did what they were told not to do and then……. it bursted they all fell in the water they were wet they got out. Mr. Gumpy said come for tea. Do you like Fish and Chips Yes they all said and they went home they went to a shop and brought a beach ball they played it all the way home.